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train trestle by estallidos train trestle by estallidos
things that have interested me lately:

-draw something. (let's play! my username is kelsey r. or understandably. i don't actually get how this shit works.)

- tumblr. (let's ... tumble! [link])

-lucid dreaming. (let's escape the shackles of reality!)
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MEW-tiful Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014  Professional General Artist
that...made me cry
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PupPatterson Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
This is one of my all time favorite poems.
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minninnewah Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, really not what I was expecting. Very powerful and elegantly worded.
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X-RAES Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist
I love your work! Can't stop stalking your gallery haha
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estallidos Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Professional Writer
aw, yay! stalk away :)
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xpheonix57 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
As many times as I've read this, it still makes me shiver.
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toska9 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
How very poignant!
A lovely compelling poem. Well done!
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here [link]
Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.
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arabesque-o Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Student Photographer

this is amazing.
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LadyofGaerdon Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Professional Writer
:wave: Hi! You have been featured by The Favorites Project at #LITplease!
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:iconestallidos:
estallidos Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Professional Writer
wow, thank you!
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:iconladyofgaerdon:
LadyofGaerdon Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Professional Writer
You're very welcome. :)
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SkellyBro Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Your writing is so amazing.... and this is terrific. I just love the end.
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WriteByNumbers Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, lucid dreaming...beautiful poem! You have some serious talent if I do say so myself! :D Haunting (see what I did thar?) story with a beautiful ending!
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estallidos Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Professional Writer
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frozenpandaman Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Student General Artist
your work is absolutely stunning. i feel inspired, empowered and moved by your poetry. it stays with me and makes me think and hope and wonder and love and dream.

thanks. :)
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estallidos Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Professional Writer
i hope i don't sound contrived when i say that truly i must thank YOU for taking the time to read my work and say such nice things <3
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ATrue Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
Very nice. The only thing I would say is that daughter's should be daughters' because it's plural. Otherwise it's perfect!
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estallidos Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Professional Writer
damn, i was hoping no one would notice that...

actually, just kidding, i didn't notice that myself. thank you for catching it!
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ATrue Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
lol, you're welcome. You can't get anything past me! ;)
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:iconsparia:
Sparia Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Student General Artist
great sentences...and descriptions...as alot more going on than what is on the page..and you do it do neatly :heart:
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estallidos Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012  Professional Writer
thank you so much, for the comments and favorite!
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:iconsparia:
Sparia Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012  Student General Artist
you are welcome!
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i-am-a-bridgewalker Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
that second stanza.

daaamn.
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xPinkTuxToTheProm Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
this is a piece that shifts and turns you inside. those are the words you hope and pray for to describe perfectly the things that happen around you, the words you hear and how to say them through your own mouth in a way that's perfect and worth the time it took to find them.

you are an astounding writer, who never fails to amaze me and many others, without a doubt.
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0freak Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i added you on draw something but im not sure which one are you understandably has a display pic of a couple and kelsey r has the pic of a girl.... which one are you?
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estallidos Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Professional Writer
the couple!
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issylyss Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012
I love this :]
And I'll play Draw Something with you!
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estallidos Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Professional Writer
yay for new draw something partners!
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LiliWrites Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Fantastic!
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estallidos Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Professional Writer
thank you my dear!
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frazzled-mage Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
So I read through this several times, and as a father I wanted it to be the other way :) Were they to cling to my hand, I would try to guide them through the mine field that is the teenage years as best as I could. Alas, I guess I will continue to be there to pick them back up and tell them there are still the light of my heart, talented, lovely and wait to cry for them when they aren't watching me.

That you for sharing this piece. I needed it today.
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Nancy-Blacket Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
I loved this :love: its so full of emotion and beautifuly writen :D
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estallidos Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Professional Writer
thank you!
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Nancy-Blacket Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
You're welcome :D
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ilyilaice Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
i'm not sure what trestle means. is it like, train tracks? anyway. nice poem!
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estallidos Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Professional Writer
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babymoonblue Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Macabre, finely spun and very well integrated into the theme of the poem. Yum!
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estallidos Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Professional Writer
thanks!
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kittako Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
Beautiful writing but very sad, I think this father and I know the same girl, my childhood friend.. :/ I feel bad looking at trains since then...
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estallidos Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Professional Writer
i'm so sorry :(
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cheekieb Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
this gave me chills.....awesome poetry
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estallidos Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Professional Writer
thank you!
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deadxbirds Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
i am junebirds on DS
<3
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estallidos Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Professional Writer
:heart:
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Lottie-Girl Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Student General Artist
I like how simple this is visually, it doesn't take away from the words that way.
A very moving narrative.
:D
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estallidos Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Professional Writer
thank you so much :)
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Lottie-Girl Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome. :D
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Butterscones Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Student
Really beautiful and meaningful. ♥
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estallidos Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Professional Writer
thank you :)
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